United Kingdom • 65 y/o • MaleReviews Received
There are some great aspects of this price of writing, but there is also a feeling of incompletion. Please do write more.
I believe that I am on both, but neither side. Darkness controls me and my thoughts, but Light is the one trying to find me. So I am both the side of Dark and Light. Yet, Light has it's consequences and Dark is a horrible thing, so yet again I don't choose either side.
I hope this makes a little sense...
nicely woven ink number two repetitive wording would need a change takes away from the piece but over all good Haikus
Through out life we all have adventures, at times they are romantic ones. Andy has done a stellar job on this story. Paul ugh, well read the story and you will see what I mean. Carol conjures up other feelings. I thought she might become famous, but....well I don't want to give it away so read it yourself.
Before I got to the ending I had many ideas of what would happen and I think you will too. Good job Apeman.
Great piece! Reminds me of a professor I had in college.
