Bangladesh • 23 y/o • MaleReviews Received
Well-written minimalism, and the title tells us all, what to expect!
I like your descriptions and your treatment of a difficult subject. Not everyone will agree with the parent's beliefs but many would relate to their situation.
I suspected that girl in a coma and girl on the balcony were the same before the big reveal but your writing shows promise.
nicely done. I liked reading it!
You evoke the knight's mental state very well, I felt sorry for him. If you develop this further, you could describe soldiers in industrial age armies reaction to the knight. They would be shocked and bewildered by his appearence.
That's a good twist Apurbo. Keep writing.
I love it. It is beautiful, sad, sweet and tragic all in one. great work