Philippines • 28 y/oReviews Received
This is beautiful
The beauty about your writing style is that you don't hesitate to put your thoughts across.
Your choice of words is remarkably mature, yet somehow compliments the youthful, but agonising, emotions so effortlessly.
I love all of the describing details that you used
This is all rather esoteric for my taste. Of its kind, it is not a bad poem. I hope to read more from you that is perhaps grounded in real life rather than fantasy perhaps?
That was beautiful. I loved the way you put everything. I feel there are a few grammar errors in the beginning, and reading your work out loud seems to help with that.
Please keep writing more, you've got the talent.
This sounds great! I love the way the words roll off the reader's tongue like they were meant to be there. The imagery is amazing and I can't wait to hear more from you.