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ASwordslasher is from IN India • 16 y/o • Female

Beauty is in the eyes of the observerπŸ˜ŠπŸ§πŸ€“πŸ‘¨β€πŸŽ¨πŸ‘©β€πŸŽ¨

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My Imaginary Friend by Skyler

A really interesting, simple yet different piece of work; really like it, keep it up

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I Just Don't Know by Aishlynn

Ok, being abnormal is something unique in me. Don't feel bad if you are different from others, you are special. About your thoughts, especially about school, are not at all abnormal. In this era, we children are made to suffer from all this. Anyway, competition is for normal ones. We are special so we just need to concentrate on our goal and certainly, we would do something they all will admire.

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Daddy I Miss You by mezcladonina12

I personally like this poem, plain words but used in a way that they really touch hearts. The work not only displays your love but also your innocence. Keep it up. And I am really sorry.

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One Large Question by Thomas Ray

About the lawgiver, we have never had any evidence of the existence of God. About what to believe, we should think of the outcome of every action to identify it as good or bad. There has never been any lawgiver, it was always us humans using holy names to fulfill our own greed. I believe if we ever got to hear anything from God, there would have been no crimes.

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Sparks by weenu

Wow, I like it. It is optimistic and motivational. Keep it up πŸ™‚

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Fly Away by Kuro

Hey, I really like this one. Positive, hidden sweetness of innocence and obviously I love the rhymes πŸ˜…. Keep it up πŸ™‚

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Monsters by Kuro

Are you sure it is out of boredom? I don't want to offend you but it seems more like your subconscious self trying to talk with you. Anyway, it is really, really good bro. Keep it up( let the world know what reality is)πŸ™‚

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Intentions and Beliefs by Thomas Ray

Just wow!
It's good to understand the whole situation from everyone's point of view before coming to a conclusion but I think it was more like a theory explaining the reason behind all the chaos of the world.
Anyway, it's great.

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