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I thought it was about break up till I read the last line... Short and great, keep it up.
Simply great... A great source of motivation for hard times, thanks ha?
Such a meticulous way of describing the most complicated phase of human lives... Hats off.
A relatable slice of life 👍👍
Keep it up 😁
Sounds a lot like some intelligent kid who is afraid of the unknown 'things' that dwell in the darkness.
The mattress part is exactly what I used to do when I was young and shared the room with my younger sister.
It inspires me to fight against my fear rather than just hiding under a blanket and pretending to be asleep.
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It is like portraying the reality with the help of words. It sure is hard to find good friends but then again, gems are known for being rare.
Woah!! I love the rhyming, and so smoothly you explained all that... no words. Keep it up.
If I have no grief of losing someone then does it mean that I never actually loved him?