A really interesting, simple yet different piece of work; really like it, keep it up
Ok, being abnormal is something unique in me. Don't feel bad if you are different from others, you are special. About your thoughts, especially about school, are not at all abnormal. In this era, we children are made to suffer from all this. Anyway, competition is for normal ones. We are special so we just need to concentrate on our goal and certainly, we would do something they all will admire.
I personally like this poem, plain words but used in a way that they really touch hearts. The work not only displays your love but also your innocence. Keep it up. And I am really sorry.
About the lawgiver, we have never had any evidence of the existence of God. About what to believe, we should think of the outcome of every action to identify it as good or bad. There has never been any lawgiver, it was always us humans using holy names to fulfill our own greed. I believe if we ever got to hear anything from God, there would have been no crimes.
Wow, I like it. It is optimistic and motivational. Keep it up 🙂
Hey, I really like this one. Positive, hidden sweetness of innocence and obviously I love the rhymes 😅. Keep it up 🙂
Are you sure it is out of boredom? I don't want to offend you but it seems more like your subconscious self trying to talk with you. Anyway, it is really, really good bro. Keep it up( let the world know what reality is)🙂
It's good to understand the whole situation from everyone's point of view before coming to a conclusion but I think it was more like a theory explaining the reason behind all the chaos of the world.
Anyway, it's great.