India • 22 y/o • FemaleReviews Given
A really interesting, simple yet different piece of work; really like it, keep it up
okay it's really sad, specially the end. It feels like he's dead.
awesome; you derive great depths from simple words.
Keep it up
Nice description of the battle of thoughts in mind, very relatable, keep it up
Sounds a lot like some intelligent kid who is afraid of the unknown 'things' that dwell in the darkness.
The mattress part is exactly what I used to do when I was young and shared the room with my younger sister.
It inspires me to fight against my fear rather than just hiding under a blanket and pretending to be asleep.
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Who is Kent? Some friend of Mark? Or, his own self? Anyway, it's mysterious and thus fun.😁😁
Just wow!
It's good to understand the whole situation from everyone's point of view before coming to a conclusion but I think it was more like a theory explaining the reason behind all the chaos of the world.
Anyway, it's great.
About the lawgiver, we have never had any evidence of the existence of God. About what to believe, we should think of the outcome of every action to identify it as good or bad. There has never been any lawgiver, it was always us humans using holy names to fulfill our own greed. I believe if we ever got to hear anything from God, there would have been no crimes.