United States • 4 y/oReviews Received
I liked it, it was very short and easy to read!
I laughed so hard I couldn’t breathe, omg!
i dont understand you sometimes MINS
It was really well written. Good Job!!
Really good
Very good poem! Keep up the good work :)
The introduction is believable and relatable. I might've put 'what kind of tat they've got me this year, not 'what kind of chaos.' It feels more appropriate for inanimate objects. Othetwise its well written.
As to the wierd developments, much depends on what's coming next before we can judge those. It should encourage fans of fantasy to read on.
It was nice.