wow.. im not sure whats going on- but its just so interesting. love it!
wow. this was spooky but it gave a good message!
gave me chills
wow. the ending. :0
OMG- the suspense ifbihsfjdsahj
yeee.. whats the plan >:D *rubs hands together*
Wow!! The way that you wrote this really just gave it a beat! I can imagine your poem being a song or something :0
part 3? o-o