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United States • 19 y/o • Female
HEYYYYYY!!!
I'm not an expert on the technical aspects of poetry, but I agree with your sentiments here.
At some points the rhymes felt akward and out of place but other then that i really loved it short and straight to the point with so many hidden layers great job
noice song loser
that's beautiful man
Another of your amazing poems.
how do you write this good!?
This makes me want to cry.
Bro, cool poem! :]