United States • 24 y/oReviews Given
This was actually a pretty good read, and I quite enjoyed it. Other than the fact that the story jumped around a bit too much (which is expected of short stories anyway), I'd say it was good.
I would understand you wrote this at quite a young age, and it's a pretty decent story for the time it was written. A few things I think you could improve on is the storyline. I found it a bit confusing as there was no explanation to what was happening. Overall, it was an okay read.