I very much enjoyed this contemporary story -- I appreciated the mystical nature of the two souls seemingly reincarnated to do good.
Quite the quirky read -- made me smile -- perhaps I wouldn't actually stab a two-timing creatin, but I would stab emotionally. Keep writing.
I like the rhythm of your poem; it was nice to read a poem with a rhyming scheme (I'm a bit old school). My mind stretched as I read your words. A prescient, powerful message.
A prescient parable for our times -- your words move beyond the Christian context towards the universal golden rule.
Hi, Such an interesting format to share your/Tobias' thoughts. I can see connections to UBI in your writing.