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I like it. I always love a far-fetched fantasy. I am mad that it ends on a cliffhanger though, but I will follow your works until my inner-book-hunger is satisfied. i gave it 4/5 because I feel that some of the elements are a bit too wack. No offense, I still love it, and the only part I didn't like was the ability to make a computer just with knowledge that they had. I have no problems with anything else, I feel that the fact that only them survived, and the dreams, are all just mysteries waiting to be solved. My inner theorist is waiting!

A little farfetched at times, and Sarah seemed like so many other heroines of popular stories (Katniss of the Hunger Games, Hermione of Harry Potter).
I wish that there was a little more diversity for her character, because she just seems to be there to be a supporting character (and not a very interesting or good one at that, eaither) until the end.
Speaking of which, the end was amazing! I wasn't expecting that, and the quote you used is one of my favorites.
Good job, and keep writing!

I can only think sad thoughts ;-;

My own grandmother passed away only a few months ago. I know how you feel. Death is the most painful torture.
Anyway, great work! Keep it up!

this is so sad. my grandad past on in november and i was with him when he past away and when the funeral people brought him to the funeral home.

This story touched my heart because I also lost my grandmother. It happened several years ago but it feels as if it has only been two day. Keep on writing

it's really nice!

A really simple idea but it has that 'Oh, my goodness' quality when you realise what caused the catastrophe. Well written, too. Lets see some more like this please.