Dari Poulson

This is so good!!!
(I'm sorry I'm so late reading these! I wish I had come earlier!)

Um, did I miss something or is the boy still unnamed?

Wow. Deep.

I have to have more of this. Please continue writing!

I like that Sarah talks to the spere like she knows it isn't just an object. Also, I love your cliffhanger. Your gonna kill me.

Whoa. Just whoa. The details are amazing. I felt like I was watching.

I really liked this one and I vote that you continue it!

I was crying. At first I was a bit confused, but when I reread it I Understood. Good job.