Woah. I did not expect this. I really enjoyed the reality of this story. Keep up the good work!
I don't know if I should cry, hit the wall, or come yell at you for making such a wonderful (but depressing) story. I need more stuff like this in my life. Good job! And PLEASE write more stuff like this.
I felt this. I felt everything that the character (Morgan right?) was feeling. This is amazing.
I have to have more of this. Please continue writing!
I like that Sarah talks to the spere like she knows it isn't just an object. Also, I love your cliffhanger. Your gonna kill me.
Whoa. Just whoa. The details are amazing. I felt like I was watching.
This is good. I wish I could write like this!
I really liked this one and I vote that you continue it!