Madison_Writes

I like how repetitive it was and how it flowed, and I also like the format. I especially like the ending because it shows how resolved everything is in the end. Good poem

I really liked this poem, it flowed well and it had a sweet mother like feel to it. I believe it's a very relate able topic, suicide is often thought about daily for some. Good job!

I like reading your work. It reflects to everyday thoughts to some or most people. You encourage and send out the message in a soft and bright way. Thank you and please do keep you the good work.

Your work is very beautiful!!!!!!!!!!

Honestly I wish it was ok
But some people don't get a happier ever after
Sometimes you just can't do it anymore
Sometimes the hurt
Wins

It's really good, and reminds me of my best friend who died three years back. It makes me remeber that she is still in my heart. Keep on writing the great stories.

I love how you made it not rhyme but still seem catchy. It's hard to do that! You are a very talented writer. Can't wait to hear more!

5 stars