United States • 23 y/o • FemaleReviews Received
Love the topic. Not often people write about voodoo dolls. Or at least I haven't seen many. I like the way it is written. The imagery used is very fitting. Good Job!
I like it a lot. Great metaphor and great ending. Use of structure was great- short when it needed to be and added to the tone. Good job
I noticed this story is tagged as Non-Fiction I'm so sorry for your loss.
This story is simple and straight to the point. It reminds me of a poem.
Definitely like how it is written
Sigh, feelings so rightfully put out but you are young and have so much way to go. I am just going to say this, you can do a lot of things at your age. Love and dating, shouldn't be on your list right now. Go have fun. Do something incredible. It is a waste of time to date when you have your adult years to come. Right now should be about school and having the time of your life.
Raw and unfiltered emotion.
I understand the feelings of heart break, not that of a break up but somewhere along those lines. It's hard at first but it does get better. Always know just because one person couldn't see how amazing you are that you're not worthless, they were just down right stupid. Stay strong through these rough times.
the poem was kind of tough. the memory of your first love is kind of tough but you will live through it and get to another day. there will be many more loves to come and each one you will learn from and then move on.