United States • 23 y/o • FemaleReviews Received
Sigh, feelings so rightfully put out but you are young and have so much way to go. I am just going to say this, you can do a lot of things at your age. Love and dating, shouldn't be on your list right now. Go have fun. Do something incredible. It is a waste of time to date when you have your adult years to come. Right now should be about school and having the time of your life.
the poem was kind of tough. the memory of your first love is kind of tough but you will live through it and get to another day. there will be many more loves to come and each one you will learn from and then move on.
Raw and unfiltered emotion.
I understand the feelings of heart break, not that of a break up but somewhere along those lines. It's hard at first but it does get better. Always know just because one person couldn't see how amazing you are that you're not worthless, they were just down right stupid. Stay strong through these rough times.
Honestly I wish it was ok
But some people don't get a happier ever after
Sometimes you just can't do it anymore
Sometimes the hurt
Wins
I love how you made it not rhyme but still seem catchy. It's hard to do that! You are a very talented writer. Can't wait to hear more!
I like how repetitive it was and how it flowed, and I also like the format. I especially like the ending because it shows how resolved everything is in the end. Good poem
I have felt like doing all of these things to myself but I think God really wants me to be on this earth because every time I try doing something like that somebody always walks into the room.
It's really good, and reminds me of my best friend who died three years back. It makes me remeber that she is still in my heart. Keep on writing the great stories.