Reviews Given
It would be.
Short but I do understand what you are saying. Keep writing and move forward. You can make it as anything you want to be. I have high hopes for you has a fellow writer.
This was a well written story that I was drawn in by the first sentence. Superb piece.
This is a lovely little story to read.
This was beautiful but it is missing something to make it great.
All I can say is this speak truths
It is a true thing that happens. In which I also like how this was written. Keep on writing please.
Rhythmic and sweet. I do like it.