United States • 19 y/o • FemaleReviews Received
I used to not have friends at all until I met Oxygen and Faith(I used their usernames). They have also taught me many, many valuable lessons throughout the time they have been my friends. Everyday I think to myself how lucky I am to have such good friends and how they don't care about how many times I doubt myself and make myself sound petty. They always tell me how great I am and how I am beautiful just the way I am. I know how you feel, feminist123, because I too have lost best friends. The lesson that I have learned is to be kind to everyone, even if they don't treat me as kind as I treat them.
Cool but sad story. you may want to jack up the age to 12+ and use grammarly to check your mistakes. Keep on writing, also see you in class! ;)
Dang. This one, is amazing. It expresses something that we all have to deal with. That lifelong bond that gets broken. That trust that you have that is so easily removed. It is written with such certainty, such truth, and after reading the Author Notes, it makes sense. It's always hard, and always will be, but we can always move on. We can always grow to be better. With spelling and grammar, it could use some more edits as well, but as a story, and autobiography, it's amazing.
This is close to home for me. My friends who are not that close to me often describe me as "That Girl". Excellent writing, and very relatable.
Please don't hurt yourself again! And remember, we are always here for you. And I know what you mean my mental trauma. (hahahaha. Experience! Yay me!) Keep up the nice work!
Great story, Feminist123! But maybe change the age to 12+ since there's a bad word? Besides that, it's great! Keep it up! :)
As one wise person told me once, on my first post, "Sometimes less is more" Something small can still have a big impact. You also define the story as "Terrible" and sure, there are grammar and spelling mistakes, but that's something editing can fix. Otherwise, for the content, it is something we all have to deal with. It's that problem in all of us we can't solve. I try to push it away with "Every down has its up, and every bad day has its good." But it only works now and then. It's a nice story. Could use some polishing, but your content, your work, its nice.
The story was obviously full of despair. I was looking for the rescue and it is a shame it never came. Could there be a happier sequel? I hope so.