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James Maybrick

United States • 26 y/o • Male

My mental state is like an out of control truck, i cant stop it but i can steer it away from as many innocents as i can.

Reviews Given

This is a really good poem its really confusing to read lol anyway nice

24 Jan, 2017 0 Edit Delete

i liked the effort you put into the story i liked the story but i would have liked it more if you added more detail

2 Feb, 2017 0 Edit Delete

i loved it but it did feel a little rushed but all and all i enjoyed it :-)

2 Feb, 2017 0 Edit Delete

OMG that was amazing laughed a whole lot and fell my Friends laughed but then i should them and they like it to

26 Jan, 2017 0 Edit Delete

good job, a lot of work went into this and i'm happy i spent 2 mins reading it.

7 Jan, 2019 0 Edit Delete

wow iv'e been keeping up with this story and i really enjoy it keep up the great work. :-)

3 Feb, 2017 0 Edit Delete

i love this story it really brings the old age of battle to right now good job.

17 May, 2017 0 Edit Delete