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i love this!! you should post the whole thing!!!!

nice story

*cries*

willaby is
angel
baby
perfect
all the good vibes
give him to me

i really really love this story! its the kinda book i would read for sure! I ESPECIALLY LOVE EMMAA! she just seems so sweet 10/10

I don't know the bigger picture but these characters are really endearing. I want to know more about their stories!! Great job with getting inside Theodore's head and showing us what he's thinking.

Okay, I absolutely love this. As someone who is non-binary I am in love with the representation. It was an amazing story but extremely sad. Also, I love the word Serendipity. You area great writer, keep it up.

You make a good point about people's prejudices against outsiders and anyone who looks different. Let me offer a little constructive criticism.

Hiding from the sun under a large oak reads better than hiding under a large oak from the sun.

If Moss is a plant based life form he should ooze sap not blood as he dies. Perhaps blood is more dramatic but sap is more consistent. Plants drained of sap die just as people drained of blood do.