Ghost

Well you answered the first question
It flows well and tells of a tragedy and it seems the depression resulting from it
I happen to know well the depression you mention
I've read this 3 times now and can't find anything i would change at all. Good Job.
And I do have to ask is the person you?

I'm confused, why is this bad? Its well written and i actually felt something which is hard for me normally. I didn't catch any major errors and for 14 this is really good. Great Job! Keep writing.

1. Great job, there are a few errors here and there but nothing major. Does make you wish it were that easy to fix though.
2. You based this mostly off a comic? I know you said it but still this is mostly off a comic?

I enjoyed reading this. i have never seen anyone rhyme seed so much and make it interesting. great job!
also were you thinking of Dr. Suess when you wrote this? it just has that sort of a feel to it.

Please do continue. Your story is an interesting one and I would like to hear more.
I'm reminded of my self in the past and now and can relate entirely to this.
Keep writing!

I enjoyed reading this. decent flow and little problems with reading it, couple of spelling/grammer things I noticed,
Was the way you worded line 24 going top to bottom or line 25 going bottom to top intentional? I had to reread it a few times to make sure I read it right
Also I understand what you are talking about
Great job and keep writing!

I found this funny because it's true. People find out you are autistic they automatically think you are different. Somehow you have to be treated slightly differently just because you have autism. It might be because of fear of what those with autism could do.

You did a great job and I hope you keep writing.

It was written well, there were things I'd change but they aren't major.
Seriously though, you really nailed it in the author notes. People don't think you would hide something from them, let alone hide something like depression, suicidal thoughts and actions, etc. We ignore people's problems unless it benefits us to know about them or its perceived you are on the fine line of committing suicide or not. Unless you're dying nobody cares is all I've seen, that alone is depressing.
I might have said too much, so recap:
Good job on the writing and you nailed what people really ought to do in the author notes. Keep up the writing, and I hope to see more soon.