Ace

Remember, don't feel bad about yourself. You are not useless! Keep on writing!
P.S.: isn't' it a needle in a haystack?

It's a good story. You may want to edit the "dooes" to make it seem less weird. Also are all the people in the story the same in real life, like at our school?

Aww that was so good! Write a sequel!

omg this is such a cute....? and sad story. love never dies, even if its not always there.

This is an amazing series of vignettes that I absolutely loved and enjoyed reading. Keep up the great work!