Ace

nice poem

This is good.

This is really good. I hope you feel better! ;)

This is really good. Sometimes people lack the courage to speak up, but I don't think that is the case here.

This is such an amazing story!

Wow, I thought I was having a bad day, guess not. :)

I feel like the mom was a little harsh at the beginning but the story is really nice!

I suggest that you add a few line breaks so that the reader can have a collective moment, but otherwise, it is really good! I truly hope you feel much better!