HazbinAllover

It's good! :)

That's why can definitely be taken out of the ending there.
All in all good poem.

Simple and raw. Very honest and pure with some kind of lingering fire. I, too, am familiar with these family dynamics- just know you're never alone, someone out there is rooting for you and you wouldn't even know.

it's a very good story as a start

What instantly sprung to my mind was "is there really nothing I can do? Is there nothing people can do to help others?"
And sometimes, there isn't anything. But other times, there are ways, even if they're just small things, to better other people's lives.

I loved this, keep it up