Canada • 19 y/o • FemaleReviews Received
I would add more detail as The Valhallan recommended. Also why is he called the night watcher?
IT'S AN AWESOME STORY, I DEFINITELY RECOMMEND IT!!!!
It's really good! If you want to try and make it better, I reccomend adding more descriptions, to help me picture. Maybe more details about the lake, or him.
So good and deep! I remember when you presented this in class.
This is so good! I really shows the emotions that present themselves during a wildfire, or really any kind of destructive incident. Great writing!