Belgium • 57 y/oReviews Received
Haha. That is what he gets
I’ve caught you now! This is a good story! Keep up the work! Have a nice day.
A great illustration of how money isn't everything! Keep writing, you're amazing. <3
I enjoyed your story. Well done.
It takes great skill to say so much with so few words. I'd have given the daughter a name but that's a minor quibble in a fine story.
I love this! You should totally continue writing! You have great ideas
You say a lot with a few words. Its moving and convincing. I like the phrase 'when the leaves loose grip.'
I like the metaphore of the first asdignment
It wouldn't have occured to me but now you mention it, its a good one.