Belgium • 57 y/oReviews Received
Caught red handed. Like it.
Haha. That is what he gets
A great illustration of how money isn't everything! Keep writing, you're amazing. <3
Made me chuckle inside
I’ve caught you now! This is a good story! Keep up the work! Have a nice day.
I enjoyed your story. Well done.
It takes great skill to say so much with so few words. I'd have given the daughter a name but that's a minor quibble in a fine story.
This is nostalgic, plausible and, I suspect, angry under the surface. Similar scenarios are playing out all over the world, including my native U.K. Well done.