~ twixx ~

Creepy... but I like it! I'm not good at poetry either-

Great job! I know exactly what you wrote this for >:3 And, no, poems don't always have to rhyme.

I'm not good at poetry and I haven't seen much about Dream SMP, but I think you did pretty good. Also, try using shift+enter when creating a stanza, then just use enter for a new stanza.

I enjoyed your poem. Well done.

I love the technique. The way you tied it together at the end is perfect. You're an amazing writer, I'm sorry I didn't give you this review earlier. I may not agree with what it's saying, but I can overlook that. A beautiful story filled with love <3

Please continue! You did a great job! I love how you even included George's colorblind point of view. A great story, I can't wait for more of this.

I enjoyed your story. You write very well. Self confidence is what you need. Well done.

wow, how eventful that was. im not a Minecraft player, but I understand how annoying it can be when you work really hard on a game and then the save file doesn't work. its really annoying. welp-
nice writing style, tho.