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You describe both the main character and the setting very well. I hope this story gets a lot more hits.

You have a great talent for vivid descriptions, and for telling exciting, interesting stories. I hope you publish more here.

This is a vivid descriptive piece. I could imagine I was there.

I like this story, you've created a plausible scenario and described it with wit and vivid detail.

This is a vivid and plausible evocation of a build up to disaster, also of a man torn between two cultures. Well done.

My mother died five years ago and it upset me very much. I was lucky because I had good friends to help me. I get the impression you're more isolated than I was. I had bad times before mum died but things improved. Its possible for things to change in your favour even when it serms impossible. Nothing can bring our parents back but we can learn to cope in spite of the pain. I still miss her but the support of my friends helped me through the darkest time. I hope this helps.

I sincerety hope things get better for you soom Scorp. The word weept should be wept but that's a minor issue. I think you're showing courage and resiliance but I wish yoi didn't have to.

This is a good story with a moving ending. I could imagine myself there.