-- The Huntress --

Gentle reminder: Be careful when you rhyme, sometimes it IS really hard to find a rhyming word that makes sense and doesn't upset the grammar of English. Otherwise great job!

Wow... this is some deep sh*t y'all... It is so freaking good! We all get this feeling sometimes that we are only puppets on strings, just a piece of the game and this just amplified and voiced out our opinions and feelings. This is like the most incredible thing ever! Love it so so much! ;)

This is literally the cycle of life. Fake friends, fake boyfriend, fake tears, betrayals, lies, tears... This poem is so so good and it reflects and gives a voice to all of those people who don't have one... I love it so so much! :)

Ahhh!!!! I love this so much. Action, thriller, tragedy and love all in one go! Keep up the good work!

This is so goooooodddd. Damn. I am at a loss for words.

Damn gurl... like everything you write hurts just right to the point where it also feels like a relief and a blessing. It just hurts... but I love it nonetheless! Please continue writing poems, they feel just right to read. I love them so so much! :)

Damn girl...I never even thought about this problem before. Now you're just making me guilty...no fair! T-T

Holy mother of god, this is good...is there gonna be more? I wanna know what happens!:))))