Hong Kong • 18 y/o • FemaleReviews Given
I feel bad for the child in the story, it isn't fair that some got the best parents and some get none or some that hated them with a passion! I love it.
Oooh... stalker alert! Exciting to read, well done!
Ahhh!!!! I love this so much. Action, thriller, tragedy and love all in one go! Keep up the good work!
This is one of the most brilliant work I have ever seen and I am sure that you could do so so much more with these kinds of topics! Thank you! KUPGW!
Gentle reminder: Be careful when you rhyme, sometimes it IS really hard to find a rhyming word that makes sense and doesn't upset the grammar of English. Otherwise great job!
This hits hard... It's so amazing that it actually hurts to read this. Betrayal is no uncommon thing, but this gives anyone a taste of just how bad it is when you lose trust in someone you loved and trusted so much. Love this so so much!
Yo. This is literally so good I cannot. All of the things you describe in the poem is so aesthetically pleasing, but it also proves your point. Love this to the blood moon and back!
Wow... this is some deep sh*t y'all... It is so freaking good! We all get this feeling sometimes that we are only puppets on strings, just a piece of the game and this just amplified and voiced out our opinions and feelings. This is like the most incredible thing ever! Love it so so much! ;)