Singapore • 24 y/o • MaleReviews Received
this is such a sad love story. i love the details but does the girl live by herself and also where are her parents? just wondering where are the guys parents in all of this. just next time include a backstory. but i love this piece of writing! i love the ending and it really completes the story and i love how the man is telling this story to the daughter! keep writing you are amazing at it!!!
I really really loved it. Cant wait to read more :) keep writing
This was a heartfelt story, although the mix of past and present tense does bring it down a star - if you can resolve that, then this would be 4 stars!
Thank you for your submission, Jailbreaker01