JPYoung

Great story, well written, nostalgia, beauty, suspense, discomfort and a fine ending!

Well done!

Well done! Like Chubby Checker, it's a great twist!

Fine story that carefully builds to an important moral.

This poem is not only exciting, but it really MOVES; best poem I've read since 'How they Brought the Good News from Ghent to Aix'!