Canada • 21 y/o • FemaleReviews Given
Beautiful, paints a vivid picture in the mind! And yes, inspiring :)
Intriguing...
Good, clear message... although when the word 'we' is used, it almost sounds like you are meaning all younger people. Of course, that wasn't what you meant. Some people have really been through things...
Interesting storyline, except you are missing a lot of commas, and your punctuation, grammar, and vocabulary are kind of sad... maybe edit?