justme2304

Canada • 21 y/o • Female

Just one out of billions... tiny, unimportant, irrelevant. If I disappeared, it would affect not even a full percentage of the population.

Reviews Given

The Quest of High School Boys. by resie

Interesting storyline, except you are missing a lot of commas, and your punctuation, grammar, and vocabulary are kind of sad... maybe edit?

14 Feb, 2020 0 Edit Delete

Basic Things Like Guilt 3 by Thomas Ray

Intriguing...

15 Feb, 2020 0 Edit Delete

Bored by Danieloptera

Good, clear message... although when the word 'we' is used, it almost sounds like you are meaning all younger people. Of course, that wasn't what you meant. Some people have really been through things...

18 Feb, 2020 0 Edit Delete

Two Friends by Thomas Ray

So relatable, this hurts! I really appreciate your style.

14 Feb, 2020 0 Edit Delete

All My Many Lives by Thomas Ray

I wish I could express myself as clearly as you can.

14 Feb, 2020 0 Edit Delete

Step One in Healing by Kiraa

Moving.

14 Feb, 2020 0 Edit Delete

Shame by scorp

yes.... yes! YES!

14 Feb, 2020 0 Edit Delete

A Single Tear by tayloremilyadaros

Beautiful! Five star, but maybe go through and edit the spelling?
Just the few slip-ups I noticed :)
comeing- coming, relization- realization, delicat- delicate, and last, personally I'm not even sure about this one so my bad if I'm wrong, but is it made-up instead of makeuped?

16 Feb, 2020 0 Edit Delete