Canada • 21 y/o • FemaleReviews Given
Interesting storyline, except you are missing a lot of commas, and your punctuation, grammar, and vocabulary are kind of sad... maybe edit?
Intriguing...
Good, clear message... although when the word 'we' is used, it almost sounds like you are meaning all younger people. Of course, that wasn't what you meant. Some people have really been through things...
So relatable, this hurts! I really appreciate your style.
This is by far my favourite. Absa-freaking-lutely amazing! I feel like you are reading right where my mind and heart meet! They need an option for infinity stars...
Beautiful! Five star, but maybe go through and edit the spelling?
Just the few slip-ups I noticed :)
comeing- coming, relization- realization, delicat- delicate, and last, personally I'm not even sure about this one so my bad if I'm wrong, but is it made-up instead of makeuped?
Wow... I've never even heard of synesthesia.... I understand how you would see this as a blessing! It sounds beautiful! Do you have that with colours too, then? I think of every colour as having a personality... is that similar?
Vivid... I love your writing style!