Reviews Given
That's almost definitly me! I daydream continuously but I don't think that it's that big. I can snap out of it if I want to, but I usually don't want to. Great work!!
-KP
The ending sounds great but doesn't really finish feeling satisfied.... I think it's because there isn't a rhyme there, but I don't know for sure. Keep writing!
Oh my gosh I feel like this all the time!! Great job!!
HOLY CRAP! That was amazing! Just WOW
I think it's great. There are a few things you could work on, but I think that it was amazing! Really brought tears to my eyes and made me stop and think. Thanks for sharing!
LOVE!! And that's great about the grades!! I hope everything is great in the future! Can't wait to hear more! Amazing detail!
Oh my gosh write more!!!! How could you end it like that??! You're killing me!! 😜
I loved it! A few grammatical errors, but it sounds amazing!! Please write more!!
Amazing!! I tend to avoid reading things about different religions (it just makes me uncomfortable), but that was great and changed my whole prospective! Good luck for the future!