Kat

It was great!!! I loved it! I hope over to hear more from you!

Very feeling. I could definitely sense the pain of the narrator. It broke my heart to hear all that - I guess those who have experiance have a hard time forgetting.

Hang in there!!!

That literally brought me to tears. I completely get - at least part - of it. My past relationships have been crap and I've found myself not trusting people as much as I used to.
Thanks for showing me I'm not the only one!!!!!!!!!! You rock!

I love the meaning to this entry! It really makes people think about how they act, and why they act.
I loved it and am yet to find anything that might need worked on.
I can't wait to hear more from you (on this story or another)!

Even if you don't write poetry, that was great! Poems don't have to rhyme, they just have to mean something. I loved the rhythm and really think you've got this.
Thanks for the poem!

Awwww. So many meanings and different ways to interpret it! I loved it!
Thank you!
-Kay

That was beautiful. It was unique yet relatable, and I respect that greatly.

I think it was great! There were a few punctuation places missed, but I don't think it degraded much. The story was beautiful, and reminded me of the move "Up."
It was my favorite growing up. Anywho, thanks! Hope to hear more from you!