Kat

Great job! But when do you tie it back together with the dream? How did the little boy become a dream-wandering person?

Oh my gosh that was amazing. Thank you!! Great boost of ironic confidence!

That was beautiful. I loved the way you put everything. I feel there are a few grammar errors in the beginning, and reading your work out loud seems to help with that.
Please keep writing more, you've got the talent.

The ending sounds great but doesn't really finish feeling satisfied.... I think it's because there isn't a rhyme there, but I don't know for sure. Keep writing!

Wow!! There were a few grammar errors, but I've got to say, it was great! When you were explaining her mother, though, it got a little confusing. I like it a lot and hope that you write more (either to this one or another).

I suffer greatly from anxiety, and hearing it explained in words got me thinking. I did feel anxiety while reading this, and it also comforted me that other people can have the same symptoms. I believe that this is a story, wether people are relating to genres when they are saying it's not or whatever.
Any who, I think it was great.

Okey, here's my review:
Positive - really got the audience wondering what will happen next and the pot line is going slow enough to get the setting started and gave the reader a sense of what's happening.
Negative- it seems that in some places you forgot to read over the text and it was hard to follow what a few mistaken words meant. I advise reading over it out loud.
(I'm trying the whole criticism thing - am I good at it yet?)
Great so far!! Please do write more! -KP

I think this symbolizes life and love perfectly. I admire the symbolism you used with the forest - very great job.