Kat

Wow.
That was great.
You should be a comedian.

Awwww. So many meanings and different ways to interpret it! I loved it!
Thank you!
-Kay

I think it was great! There were a few punctuation places missed, but I don't think it degraded much. The story was beautiful, and reminded me of the move "Up."
It was my favorite growing up. Anywho, thanks! Hope to hear more from you!

Wow. I almost fell over. That was great!! Please do write more like this!!

Wow! Great!
One thing, the ending was a little confusing. Was the narrator playing the guitar or the version of himself playing the guitar?
It encaptured me like light (it would make sense if you knew me)! I hope I get to hear more!

That's horrible!! (Not the writing, the emotions and pain)
I just died inside.
You probably feel a lot worse. I am so sorry. I hope you've gotten over it somehow and were able to fin happiness. I sometimes dread waking up, to be truthful, but I don't know exactly how you feel.
Depression is hard. I hope you feel better soon. Losing loved ones breaks you in a way that can only be forgotten by short distractions. I'm so sorry.

I loved it. I hope to be reading a lot of your stories. I connected gravely to this price of your writing, even though there were a few grammatical errors. If I were your parents/family, I would be proud.

I felt very inspired (and sometimes to get better at your gift you have to strangely - metaphysically - punch critics in the face). Please keep writing and staying confidant. People need your voice and understanding!! The world will only get darker, those with light need to shine their brightest!!