Reviews Given
Definetly!! I get where you are coming from, my friend!
I few grammar errors and the wrong "then" at one point, but besides that I am very impressed and LOVED IT!
I totally get it. Thanks for the poem, made me feel a little less alone. Hang in there!
I love the meaning to this entry! It really makes people think about how they act, and why they act.
I loved it and am yet to find anything that might need worked on.
I can't wait to hear more from you (on this story or another)!
I liked it, I kind of agree on the rant part, but I agree soooooo muuuccchhh about the self distructive motives of humans and how they act against themselves.
Thank you!
I loved it!! I really want to hear more! How did the diseasestart? How could he remember loathing strawberries and not his children? What happened to his wife, parents, what did the worms look like?
I really like asking questions. You don't at all have to answer them at all. I'm just a question-er.
That was beautiful. It was unique yet relatable, and I respect that greatly.
Even if you don't write poetry, that was great! Poems don't have to rhyme, they just have to mean something. I loved the rhythm and really think you've got this.
Thanks for the poem!
That literally brought me to tears. I completely get - at least part - of it. My past relationships have been crap and I've found myself not trusting people as much as I used to.
Thanks for showing me I'm not the only one!!!!!!!!!! You rock!