Khaled Saeed

This is a piece of art that vividly, so intricately, paints the details of the city. But then the second half of your story takes the reader into human experiences with disarming simplicity. I started as a reader but soon turned into a witness. Simply brilliant!

These words would be hard for the materialistic mind to grasp but for those hearts that have learned to feel, it is a goldmine of wisdom.
Rumi had the insight and awareness but your understanding and appreciation brings it to life in simple English. Thank you, Aquarius.

Numbed! Totally numbed by the creativity of expression and the sheer clarity of thought.
Matt Decker, you did it again

Agonising, mesmerising, and then, out of nowhere, somehow gratifying. It is absolutely rare to see such abstract thoughts written with such simplistic clarity.

A courageous, powerful story.
Amid your painful helplessness, I saw the bond between you and your wife severely tested but withstanding the material trials. Very few among us can still claim the privilege of such strength in this sacred institution of love. My compliments to you and your wife for showing the way.

Lovely!! You vividly take the reader into the journey, sharing the moments and the places.
Maybe some para breaks would have been better but this comment of mine should not distract you from your creative, and beautifully captured, writing.

No ordinary mind could convey with such ruthless honesty.
Only a receptive and caring heart could bleed such anguish.
You write with painfully powerful clarity of thoughts and words. I have a feeling the healing process has already begun, else it would not have been possible to pen it all.
Fare well, my friend

Remarkable... no, let me revise it, mesmerising