LeCat127

I like the role that knowledge plays as a sort of sentient thing in this story, rather than just a fact like you might expect.

Honestly I really like this poem, even if it is a bit melodramatic. I like how it's all kind of just stated as a fact, not as the speaker necessarily feeling sorry for themselves. It's an interesting idea.

I like the way this is written; how it's an analogy, but also just a fun little snippet of some gossips at a ball or whatever. It's fun to imagine what the people I know in life would wear, or what I would wear, in this world. Nice work.

This used to be the story of my life. It's nice, at least, to have someone worth thinking about in this way.

Nice analogy. Frustrating how it can be so much harder to move on than to continue waiting, even though it hurts.

I like the rhetoric of this. And it's relatable.

Good prose.

This is a fun little snippet. It kind of seems like a writing prompt.