LeCat127

I actually enjoyed this very much. It's an intriguing idea that really makes you think about like and death and good and bad. All that stuff. Great work.

One of my favorite short stories I've ever read. The emotions are spot on and the way it's written really pulled me in. Excellent work.

Nice prose. Relatable.

You write a lot of stories and musings and whatnot that inspire a lot of curiosity in me. It's all vague enough to both be relatable and to make me wonder what things everyone has that make them think things like this.

One hundred percent felt that "you definitely know my sister" part. I like the mood of this story, the simplicity of it that explores the passing of strangers in a person's life.

Ah, yes, secrets. This describes them well. Great work.

Ooh, I actually really like this! It sounds like it should be a song.

Nice story, and congrats on the 50,000 words! Do you think you'll ever publish a novel?