LeCat127

To me, this read like a fever dream. I'm not sure I understood what was happening. It was interesting, though.

You write a lot of stories and musings and whatnot that inspire a lot of curiosity in me. It's all vague enough to both be relatable and to make me wonder what things everyone has that make them think things like this.

I like the metaphorical feel of this story.

I really like the way this story begins. The first paragraph about tragedies has good rhetoric and I find it very interesting.

This poem tells a really interesting story. I especially like the way it begins, talking about secrets and hiding, and I love the lines "Are you not tired of not being able to be you? Is it because you think it's taboo?" Good work.

This made me think of a friend of mine, for some reason.
I noticed a lot of people asking for more of this, and I don't know if you have written more or not, but I think it's actually quite good as a standalone, just a snippet of story that is what it is.

I've had this problem before. Honestly I don't have any idea what the best course of action is when wanting to say something but being afraid of what will happen if you do, but this certainly captures the uncertainty of the situation.

Well, I think I get what you're saying here, at least in my own way. Good prose, by the way.