LeCat127

Ooh, I really like this one. I like the unique style of telling a story through letters, especially at the end where we can only assume we know why the brother quit writing. This is a story that I would want more of, except I don't know if it could work to expand on it; that would change the feel of it. Anyway, really good work.

Ooh, I actually really like this! It sounds like it should be a song.

Ah, yes, secrets. This describes them well. Great work.

One hundred percent felt that "you definitely know my sister" part. I like the mood of this story, the simplicity of it that explores the passing of strangers in a person's life.

One of my favorite short stories I've ever read. The emotions are spot on and the way it's written really pulled me in. Excellent work.

I actually enjoyed this very much. It's an intriguing idea that really makes you think about like and death and good and bad. All that stuff. Great work.

I like the way this is written; how it's an analogy, but also just a fun little snippet of some gossips at a ball or whatever. It's fun to imagine what the people I know in life would wear, or what I would wear, in this world. Nice work.

Honestly I really like this poem, even if it is a bit melodramatic. I like how it's all kind of just stated as a fact, not as the speaker necessarily feeling sorry for themselves. It's an interesting idea.