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United States • 20 y/o • Female

"There you are sweetheart sorry I'm late I was looking everywhere for you."-Howl

Reviews Received

Thomas Ray reviewed The Pretty Girls Friend Part #2

I can't really tell how long they've known each other for... "love", already?

9 Dec, 2019 0

Thomas Ray reviewed The Pretty Girls Friend Part #1

I think if I was in her situation, I would be less of the "nobody likes me" and more of "you don't even know me."
But I don't know this character very well yet, and we aren't in her head, so there's some ammount of mystery in regards to what she actually feels.
I'm going to read the next part now.

9 Dec, 2019 0

tayloremilyadaros reviewed The Most Wonderful Thing

a few grammatical errors but overall beautiful.

6 Dec, 2019 0

Thomas Ray reviewed The Power of Dreams; Prologue

I'll be honest, this is hard to read because of the formatting. A few more paragraphs would be super helpful. The story itself feels very playful, and I look forward to more of it.

20 Nov, 2019 0

tayloremilyadaros reviewed The Pretty Girls Friend Part #3

no. no no no. you can not just end it there! the ending was so short! maybe write another version of the story that is not just a text but more of a narrative? but dont leave it like this!

18 Nov, 2019 0

tayloremilyadaros reviewed The Pretty Girls Friend Part #2

dont stop now! and add some sort of twist or like other characters or something, but it was good!

18 Nov, 2019 0

tayloremilyadaros reviewed The Pretty Girls Friend Part #1

love it its cute, tbh you came on a little strong on the first few texts, next time just ease into it, but other than that i love it!

18 Nov, 2019 0

Ace reviewed The Pretty Girls Friend Part #2

this was good, maybe in the next part you could add a twist of some sort.

13 Nov, 2019 0