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I think that the wind is God, the dark is sin, the light is salvation and heaven, the fear is satan, and the people are being lead to salvation. I really love the story! I think you did a good job of describing and telling the story of the people.

AWWWWWW Saylarter is officially Saylas and Carter's ship name...

it's all coming together now!

I agree with stormy, that was powerful! I care too.

I LOVE it! So many people would disagree, or not say their opinion!

This is so true, I've had to help a friend who got her heartbroken. Basically all our friends ganged up to help her and we summoned the power of darkness and got revenge (lol!) But in the end, after we called the guy out, we all silently agreed that we would do anything for each other.

"I can't-I can't breathe!" screeched Anna. "OH MY GOD OH MY GOD HELP I DIDN'T CONSENT TO THIS-" Katya yelled. I giggled like a total psychopath as the wind rushed back to me, lifting my hair. I swung my legs as we arrived at the bottom and shot up again.

Up, down, up, down. I laughed some more as Katya and Anna held on to their seats for dear life.

The ride slowed down, slowly resting near the ground. With a loud clunk, the seats slowly touched the ground.

"I...I hate-ha...hate you," Katya panted. I cringed as her voice cracked. "Guess who doesn't have any vocal cords anymore." I laughed despite my friend’s disheveled composure.


Me, forcing my friends to do things they don't want to do!