United States • 19 y/oReviews Received
I lke the metaphore of the fist and the whole poem is evocative. Good work.
I enjoyed that. Well done.
That was a wonderful story. Well done.
The frustrations you're describing are quite common for writers and other people too. That doesn't make it all right but it means people can do their best and carry on despite the issues. The clay metaphore is good.
That was wonderful. More than I've questioned whether mirrors are portals to parallel dimensions. Whether we humans in this dimension are parallel reflections of those in another. Well done.
A lot of writers feel like this at times. I sometimes do. For a recent story I wstched a documentary about lifeboat crews, then used a similat scenario in my story 'Dark Midwinter Night.' The story took a respectable number of hits but not as many as some of mine and not as many as I hoped for. Pethaps I didn't convey all I wanted to. What do other people think?
