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Yikes.
Creeped me out. Good job!
As mentioned before, this story needs some revision. Some periods are missing, and some sentences have grammar mistakes such as "'We closed now,'". I didn't know if that intentional if the creepy dude spoke weirdly, or a sloppy mistake.
Anyway, besides that, you did an amazing job! Can' wait for more.

So good and deep! I remember when you presented this in class.

The Hunger Games!
And, wow, so poetic! I absolutely love the details. Keep up the awesome work!

Love this! You should see that thing I wrote about the soldier who went to Korea, then returned to the US and the government took everything away from him. Now he's homeless.True story. :/
Anyway, great poem!

oooOOoooooOoooh! Sci-fi! Love it!

Dang
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Why are you so good at poetry?

:D

BRUH
HOW IN THE WORLD DO YOU DO THIS