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I agree that this could be outstanding if developed further. Obviously, it seems a little confusing at first as we are bombarded with so many fantasy characters so quickly, but there is an awful lot of good stuff here to work with.... Please stick with it and tell us some more.....

brilliant start. Please write some more....

Looking forward to Part II
Is she going to be banished from the Fairy world?

The ending was so unexpected I had to just laugh out loud!

What a tragic story & very well written, Well done

Excellent story

Yes, spooky describes this to a 'T'

Great! I loved the suspense!
I think a word other than 'goo' would have been better though for the human remains.
(Also, a couple of spelling mistakes like 'whale' instead of 'wail' - hope that's not being pernickety.....)